Twilight_Lord

I have already dropped this novel. Read <Return of the demonic emperor>, It is a similar work by my colleague

Thanks for the review

Thanks for the review, I realised the same things and dropped the novel.[img=recommend]

It was my first work and I dropped it a long time ago as realized there were too many plot holes to edit it. I occasionally log in to the account to read the comments and reviews. So far, My experience was terrible to say it in a good way. It received a lot of criticism which I welcomed to do well in future novels but some readers were....well, let's leave it at that. I just wanted to say that your comment made my day. Thank you

The story seems historic, a bit different from generic novels these days, let's see how it will be

So far so good

hmmm. ..

I do know my mistakes, and It was my first work, my first idea but I didn't know how to tell the story at that time, not that I am any better now, but I am trying to Improve, thanks for the review.

Yeah, he did! I forgot to mention it, I have updated the chapter now.