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Mystic_Dragoon2mthPostedThe first few chapters are not promising. Already I can see myself groaning at the sight of yet another overpowered MC with the personality of stale cardboard. MCs like this are boring and a dime a dozen and the y sacrifice character and story in favour for a power fantasy but to each their own. But not for me. For a story a "random guest" praised as better in character and story alone on my own story out of the blue on an entirely different platform and was a crossover. I don't see that. Not to mention the ambiguous nature of the comment I received didn't specify the real faults of my story which I hoped I can rectify here with some of the faults I have noticed.
- Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
you did just kick him Miao
Cheng Heng looked at Zhou Miao but did not say anything. However, an angry expression appeared on the blank face in the emoji box. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
loathing! unadulterated loathing.
'Hatred'. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
Akira as the true male lead for the win!!!
"Oh, my God." I muttered for the third time as the scene of Akira kissing me replayed in my mind. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
yeah sure he did tried to maybe murder her. but hey let's not mention that.
"I would say Corey, he seem more genuine than the others and for me, it seems like he is the only one that really loves Roselyn and cares about her." Chelsea said, suddenly appearing in front of him, making him flinch and retreat back a little, to get some distance between the two of them. She was reading her book and drinking tea as usual, being a back character and only appearing sometimes so why is talking to him now? - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
Local man confirmed to be too kinky to be tortured.
"Go ahead, I don't mind." Liam replied with a smirk, getting closer to her as she kept lashing out and hitting him randomly, with a scared expression on her face and kept backing away until she fell back and he was able to take the whip from her hair and then banged his face against hers, making her faint and collapse on the floor, lifeless and not giving any signs of being up. "That was easier than I though." He commented, with a smile, then looked back at Oliver, untying him and gently putting him on the ground. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
A little unnerving. hrmmm well it's not a red flag. But let get put an Amber one just to be safe.
As usual, the smile on Wyatt's face was a little unnerving. It was almost as though he could look through all the layers and walls she had put up, diving right into the center of her thoughts. There seemed to not be much she could hide from him, Alice realized. That was a terrifying thought. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
He said the line!!! GET HIM!
That girl. She's an interesting one. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
as so often is the case. considering those in power would prefer their past to be glorified and embellished to the east of their ability.
There was no such thing as 'lord' or 'master' or 'sir' with each other. They acted like equals, a true rarity in Gladiolum, as far as Alice could tell. Then again, all she had ever learned of the country were information Wyatt and Charlie fed her. She had gone through some of the books in the home's private library but the information in those books seemed more like propaganda than anything. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
Yup definitely a male lead.
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what does the love brain even mean?
What was even more infuriating was that the original body was actually the love brain that she looked down on the most! - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
that or bone one another
How strange, but the troops know their dynamic better and for much longer than me. They're awkwardly suspicious but I don't sense anyone is trying to lie. What are those two going to violently fight or something? - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
Ronald is bi and there is nothing you can do about it.
"But I'm already lost in your eyes." - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
I swear if that turns out to be her future husband I will cackle.
One toddler of a brat even dared to poke my cheek, to which I let out a very displeased cry. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
another reincarnator in the house. whooo
"You too huh...I thought I was the only one." he hums quietly, as if to himself. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
......
Imposter Among Us - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
Hans Christian Anderson . LOL
Issue: Crown Prince Hans Christian, Prince Anderson Erik, Princess Johanna Nesrin, ] - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
uh oh... you know what this means.
<she only belongs to me> - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
You're human. Give it five minutes.
For the sake of my life, I would never make such a stupid mistake. - Mystic_Dragoon1yrCommented
don't worry its a feeling deep within that causes you to see this
Nevertheless, once again, the thought that he appeared similar to someone bugged her. The fact that she couldn't pinpoint who exactly it was irritated her.