Review Detail of Mystic_Dragoon in Harry Potter: New World

The first few chapters are not promising. Already I can see myself groaning at the sight of yet another overpowered MC with the personality of stale cardboard. MCs like this are boring and a dime a dozen and the y sacrifice character and story in favour for a power fantasy but to each their own. But not for me. For a story a "random guest" praised as better in character and story alone on my own story out of the blue on an entirely different platform and was a crossover. I don't see that. Not to mention the ambiguous nature of the comment I received didn't specify the real faults of my story which I hoped I can rectify here with some of the faults I have noticed.