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Paul_Bradt3dCommentedThis author must love Tarantino films with all the feet shots.
Chris let go of the nibbling feet, lowered his body and wrapped his arms around aunt Edie's torso, covering her mouth with his big mouth and kissing her continuously, his big hands also stroking her nipples and buttocks.- Paul_Bradt1mthCommented
Author has a strong nerf game.
He didn't bother to explain, its pointless to tell someone that because he can't use magic on one of his hands, he now even after being very powerful can't use his full power, to someone who can't even cast magic without wands. - Paul_Bradt4mthCommented
Why does this character say he wants to live his life his way and every time someone lectures him with their beliefs he just does what they say.?
"Calling it a bond would be an understatement… it's more than that." Arthur refuted, sighing. "It's unfortunate but you can't be with Alysanne. You're not a bastard anymore, you can't do whatever you want." - Paul_Bradt4mthCommented
Nor should he be.
I don't think I'll be a virgin tomorrow. - Paul_Bradt5mthCommented
Didin't WW2 just end? Harry's dad attended Hogwarts in the late sixties to early seventies.
One of the four, James Potter, confidently inquired, "Prongs, what have you found? Anything unusual?" - Paul_Bradt5mthCommented
And again he complains.
"Alright." I muttered, "Second… Why in the name of all things holy are you wearing nothing but an apron that is clearly too small for you?" - Paul_Bradt6mthCommented
And he is complaining why exactly?
FUCKING HELL! - Paul_Bradt6mthCommented
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3. Anakin doesn't become Vader and we get a different person as Palpatine's new apprentice (bariss, asajj, etc.) Please let me know your thoughts, I keep switching between the three wouldn't effect the plot too much till after rotj but afterwards the story would go in 3 different directions - Paul_Bradt8mthCommented
It seems 90% of writers hate MJ thanks to modern marvel comics. Try to remember she was Petes best girl for a very long time.
Flash tried to grab his shoulder, but Peter casually grabbed his hand and broke it, Flash screamed in pain, but Peter hadn't finished holding Flash and threw him into a nearby trash can, of course this caught the attention of the nearby students who were incredulous at the one-sided fight, without caring about anyone's opinion Peter continued walking towards Jessica, Liz who saw the scene ran to see how Flash was doing, Mary Jane was amazed and saw Peter walk past her without noticing her existence. - Paul_Bradt9mthCommented
He built a modern steam ship of steel.Did he teach the primitives how to make these ships?Because if he did not then the little dragon has a fleet of outdated wooden ships that he can simply tear through.
But let's not forget my immediate predicament, which had my colleague Captain Terys trembling in his boots. How on earth were we supposed to navigate through these formidable fleets? - Paul_Bradt9mthCommented
Every MC in fan-fics complains about Fury in the inner dialogues then does exactly as they are told.
"Then you'll remain a half-empty glass, always wondering what you could have achieved. But if you open yourself up to the possibility, embrace the power of collaboration, you'll find a purpose greater than you ever imagined. That rang true for the Avengers. It can for you too." - Paul_Bradt1yrCommented
Every time
Daphne: "Hello I am Daphne Greengrass and this is my friend Hannah Abbot. Can we sit with you" - Paul_Bradt1yrCommented
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2) Continue the story without doing the Pov.