Pretty nice the story is very similar to the TWILIGHT new wolf but this is a little better it has a lot common with it particularly the 5th chapter otherwise it is a nice story

Thank you for the chapter and what new ff you are talking about you never said anything on the discord?

I knew it.

soo true

wait how did Lucas stop Gabreil?

thank you for the chapter

thank you for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

cool

nice chapter, it was fun to see hope blabber like that. But obviously she is going to sjot down the idea that lanodon is a supernatural because of lucas.

they are thirsty

snek snek big boy snek, Griffindor.

The story is interesting the sentence formation could be better. But it is nice and interesting keep it up.

thank you for the chapter

thanks for the chapter.

I feel like you are about to pull an arranged marrige again.

The reactions are realistic but is not really age appropriate. Like they are 12 year olds talking about love and stuff. I think you should change the Love to like. So it could be more better I guess.

it is a fun world building novel with magic and the Mc seems the go getter types. At this point it looks good but the updates could be better.