This master of his…

He’s right!

I just searched up the name of the skil, it looks like it’s from this authors other novel, Xuan Ni (renegade immortal)

Whenever the mc flexes, he has to make sure it shocks the world

He’s already planning again

Something small?

I’ve been reading this for years for free so I decided I should write a review. I love it, I’d even gift the author some money if there was art for the characters other than the mc. Keep up the good work author

Uhh isn’t this ‘The Hero Took Everything from Me, So I Partied with the Hero’s Mother!’? Idk if it’s just a different name but same author but that one doesn’t seem to be on webnovel but has more chapters out but do correct me if I’m wrong.

Just because u know how to do something in a game doesn’t mean u can do it in real life

I thought they were both the same level?

Thanks for the chapter, but author can u make it the characters more recognizable in dialogues since it’s kind of confusing, I don’t know which one of the girls are talking at times.

Wait when did they find out about his arcana being Loki?

Guessing this is that lillith girl since she’ using a knife

Hey author have u dropped this?

So she couldn’t escape an early death in this life either😢. Well not necessarily early but she didn’t die of old age in either time lines.

Cmon man… I actually liked this too. AND on top of that this isn’t even the first novel that you made that abruptly ended that I actually liked. Well it’s ur novel so u can decide whatever u want but u might end up losing the readers who actually enjoy your novels’ trust if u keep doing this. Good luck on ur future novels tho

He needs to fix his mental health quick

Huhhhh??? How could he forget? Isn’t that type of stuff usually important?

I don’t know if I should continue having hope that Zach will end his relationship with this Camilla girl at one point and hook up with the other Kristen girl. I just felt like she has more of the main girl vibes but Camilla seems like a good girl, the only flaw I might have with her in the future is if she overreacts with situations like the one just now where he had a girls card in his jacket. Im pretty sure she’s gotten cheated on before or something so she might not handle it well even if nothing happened, but if she doesn’t I think I should give up hope on the other girl. Their relationship is good and all, but celebrities and soccer players have a lot of relationship problems so I was just thinking about future instances with what I’ve deduced from Camilla.

This is pretty good so far, then MC’s power isn’t too OP, he can see other peoples stats like most other MC’s but I guess he sees a little more. Also he can see if someone else is about to have a huge chance, if it’s either good or bad. Hopefully we can see more chapters uploaded because we barely know about the MC or his progress so far other than his upgraded ability.