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It’s really good, I’m hooked. But it also has some issues I’d like to see improved. For example, the main character is very egocentric — while it makes him stand out from the rest, it can also be exasperating. Another thing is that he has too many privileges. Even though they’re justified by his background and abilities, I think Nezu lets him get away with too much. Still, changing that now would probably feel too forced. That’s pretty much it from me — not much, haha, but that’s all I’d complain about. The beginning was slow, but nothing that would make you say the book is bad or drop it. Chatgpt...

Hey author, you're doing great! Keep up the good work!

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What you said in point 2 is very noticeable, but he also did not actively do anything to change it, all the people who knew him could read him like an open book, and that is very bad considering that he is a politician even if he does not want to. The cliché part, the truth is that it doesn't bother me, but it should be taken into account that you use the cliches of the anime, if you commonly use the ones from web novels or other similar ones it would be fine, the ones from the anime don't fit either because of the context or because the feeling it gives when you read it. Point 4, I am in conflict with this point, on the one hand he shows concern for the girls but on the other, he should not show so much concern, he is apathetic and nihilistic but it seems that he had an attack of rage when he found out what they did. pass to the girls. I'm not saying he should be totally apathetic, but showing so much agitation over different situations doesn't fit the type of character you want to portray. I will continue reading, but I hope the MC improves, even if he is still stupid but at least wiser and with greater composure.

I read it up to chapter 40, but to continue reading I first want to vent here. This story is average at best. First let's talk about the protagonist, he is absolutely average, below if I go by my opinion, he has nothing remarkable in himself, no intelligence, wisdom, knowledge, not even self-confidence. Most of the time it seems that he doesn't even have a clue about what is happening around him and in his situation, it is absolutely frustrating to read him and follow his story, if you put Agent, his maid as the main protagonist of this story you would have a story Better yet, he outshines him in absolutely everything (which is not very difficult), more efficient, intelligent, wise, and even in leadership, for me the protagonist is a puppet of this maid, he almost always follows her instructions and advice, I don't know if because he likes the servant MC, capable and his thoughts are predetermined by the system. Another absolutely unpleasant thing is the "comedy", I don't know if the author simply has no ideas or whatnot, but he takes out all the anime cliches and puts them in this story, anime cliches don't go well with an author novel!, but well, the author portrays the MC as an isekai, beta and generic protagonist who cannot stand firm and say no to girls, frankly ridiculous and illogical situations in the story abound, such as when 20,000 girls "kidnap" the MC Imagine it as 20,000 people carrying one person on the street dragging him, I don't know how these things happen but they don't make sense. But hey, I will continue reading simply because I am interested in the other world, let's see how far I can last.

You have very good works, but if there is something that I should complain and get frustrated with, it would be that you are governed too much by the book's framework, for example in Rakudai it was simply the same, many things were just like the cannon, a good part of absolute was also almost the same duo and so on, but hey, it wasn't just this novel, you've been doing the same thing in your other novels.

I liked it, but it's not my type of novel. The MC has no peculiarities, dreams or charisma that makes me sympathize with him, want to read him again, just bland. The rest were good, but I left it at chapter 33 due to my lack of taste for the protagonist.

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It is very good, for me it is a breath of fresh air since the mc is dedicated to exploring deep energy and not only for fights and others, but also to create things (which I loved) exploring matrices, runes, language, etc It is no longer a common cultivation story where as long as you are one kingdom higher you are the maximum, this story for me was about an ingenious mc where he takes advantage of everything and exploits it, something that is rarely done in cultivation novels. Are there other novels like this? Where the Mc does not focus so much on fighting but on creating things, for example machines, matrices, science fiction things, etc. [Google translator]