noobssss69

it's hard to imagine words like balance between work and rest coming from hank pym

earth 838?

why not invite jessica jones since you alrrady have the opportunity to approach her?

still no update

plesse stick to vice admiral since this is a pirate and navy world

it was ok to change some team but not the ino shika cho since the 3 clans need to work on being in sync for their formation

mithrandir

nice. like castle lords or lord of the people

author-san, i truly think this is the best pokemon fanfic out right now. it way more realistic than other works and shows a better perspective of the world of pocket monsters

the no spaces of some words bother me