rahman_m04

The writing becomes strange from chapter 11 onward and feels very uncomfortable to read, like an unedited MTL (machine translation).

Lucifer does sound good, but he's too overpowered, and he's a demon that can't be categorized as good, which would clash with the demons in DxD.

I get goosebumps every time I read this. Actually, the concept of the Flugel is good, but aren't all Flugel supposed to be female??? And the conversation gives me chills.

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"It's a good story, but I don't really like it when the main character is paired with Venelana Gremory because there are many characters from the two anime. Why Venelana Gremory, who is already married? Honestly, the story would be much better if the main character's parents were made to die at the beginning so that there could be an adoptive mother relationship with Venelana Gremory in the early part."

"Why, writer, why did you use Basara's 'final sacrifice' as the reason for chapter 153? That is complete trash, and why couldn't Damian and his allies kill even one, yes, just one? Only Xerxes. This arc is really trash."

+1

as I remember Sirzechs age in cannon 200

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Highschool of the Dead , left 4 dead , back 4 blood,