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Tbh less Metaverse, as I find it to be primarily fluff in Persona fics. The only time you should write the Metaverse is with important events that occur in it. Like the past few chapters with the Kaneshiro infiltration, you could have glossed over all that with maybe a paragraph of description and nothing would have really been lost. The real meat of Persona fics is the life sim stuff key events such as persona awakenings and boss fights.
Grass aint super effective against Gible lol. Dragon Dance should have been picked, as I am pretty sure thats the only move on the list Garchomp cant actually learn.
Magic resistance baby. Gotta get it
Merge, because I have no interest in reading about canon Ruby Rose. The merge could be explained by simply Mason being a parallel version of her soul. Ruby won out of course due to her Aura being active, but since they were the same soul fundamentally Mason's memories transferred. This would also give the excuse to enhance Ruby's Aura and Semblance as well, as we have seen Semblances change/adapt with character growth and change. Also it would give Ruby some ideas on to how to use her knockoff Dojutsu.
I could see a Chakra cloak happening with the Susano'o tbh. Having the Susano'o chakra coming from each tenketsu points without fully expanding into a full Susano'o (and its different stages). This could possibly even work inside the Chakra construct as well, giving Sasuke effectively double armour.
I hope Tsunade can help make sure the Uchiha don't get boxed in a corner by Danzo and Hiruzen. If any change needs to be made, its preventing the Massacre from ever occuring and helping prevent the Uchiha from being discriminated. With Tsunade hopefully influencing the village decisions to recind Tobirama's Uchiha decisions. Thanks for the chapter!
Not any more OP than a certain other child prodigy named "That Man"
To be fair, with just the Kaleidoscope Will could throw hands and beat all the top 10. You gotta remember that Types from Nasuverse could easily solo DxD and as Zelretch he was able to win that fight against Type-Moon. When it comes down to it, if Will is ever losing he can literally just dip out of the world-line and re-engage whenever it suits him. At this point there really is no narrative tension when it comes to battle, with all the goodies Will has on his own. Truth be told, this fic is primarily a slice of life while exploring the multiverse.
Eh, he had adult reasoning and lost his parents becoming an orphan again. While Mangekyou is OP... He also loses his eyesight when he uses it making it not as nutty as the EMS, not to mention he wouldn't be able to handle the Chakra usage anyways. It's literally a canon power that is attached to the character MC was isekai'd as when they lose people they care deeply for. Personally I struggle to see how in canon how he didn't go further than 1 tomoe from the massacre but thats just me.
DxD gods are probably faster and more durable in a bigaton way... But both Nasuverse gods and Campione gods are faaar stronger in Conceptual shenanigans which is far more important. Servants from Fate would top out in DxD as Ultimate Class simply due to physical feats not matching DxD in that regard, however they can punch up REALLY well due to conceptual hax. Divine Spirits (Nasu) are magnitudes higher than Servants. Deities like Amaterasu from Fate would solo the entire DxD verse no diff because the raw power and conceptual hax DxD just lacks.
This is... Actually really good! Definitely feeling the Slice of Life vibes with the sweet character interactions. The Wanjie Mall is a very good concept to bring in Out of Context powers with clear defined goals that he has listed. My advice would be to not add in too many characters from other series' to the harem because big harems usually do more harm to the story than good. Harem of maybe 4-5 people would be ideal to keep them well written and relevant in the story. Overall I enjoyed what you had written and can't wait for more!
Many divine constructs are wielded by mortals though? Dawnbreaker isn't a sword a rando can pickup and use, they need to be Meridia's champion. Very much like Exalibur, with Vivian allowing Artoria to use it. And worst comes to worst and you're really picky, Boosted Gear is a divine contruct so he does have something to hurt Achilles.