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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1mth
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    Tbh less Metaverse, as I find it to be primarily fluff in Persona fics. The only time you should write the Metaverse is with important events that occur in it. Like the past few chapters with the Kaneshiro infiltration, you could have glossed over all that with maybe a paragraph of description and nothing would have really been lost. The real meat of Persona fics is the life sim stuff key events such as persona awakenings and boss fights.

    Ch 48 The Fiancé.
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    Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
    Video Games · Phantom_Voyage
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX8mth
    Replied to Brokedepressed

    Grass aint super effective against Gible lol. Dragon Dance should have been picked, as I am pretty sure thats the only move on the list Garchomp cant actually learn.

    'I'm going two to pick Outrage and and Dragon Rush from that list.'
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    REINCARNATED AS A POKEMON, SO NOW WHAT?
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX9mth
    Commented

    Magic resistance baby. Gotta get it

    That was the last thing he saw before he blacked out.
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    Another Schnee on Remnant
    Anime & Comics · Arokey
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
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    Merge, because I have no interest in reading about canon Ruby Rose. The merge could be explained by simply Mason being a parallel version of her soul. Ruby won out of course due to her Aura being active, but since they were the same soul fundamentally Mason's memories transferred. This would also give the excuse to enhance Ruby's Aura and Semblance as well, as we have seen Semblances change/adapt with character growth and change. Also it would give Ruby some ideas on to how to use her knockoff Dojutsu.

    I had an idea of both of them fighting for control and mostly put him in as a way for Ruby to have memories of other fictions, but I am unsure if that is still a good idea. I feel like it adds unnecessarily complicated aspects to the story so I'm asking here to see if you would like for me to keep him and not rewrite or remove him.
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    Roses Multiverse Power Unlocking System
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Commented

    Lol, Cultivator protagonist Indra. Light the Shinobi world on fire baby. It deserves no mercy.

    Ch 1 Extraction
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    Ancestor of Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · SupremeDeus
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
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    I could see a Chakra cloak happening with the Susano'o tbh. Having the Susano'o chakra coming from each tenketsu points without fully expanding into a full Susano'o (and its different stages). This could possibly even work inside the Chakra construct as well, giving Sasuke effectively double armour.

    [IMG OF SASUKE IN SAGE MODE]
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    Naruto : The Lightning Flash (Sasuke Uchiha)
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
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    I hope Tsunade can help make sure the Uchiha don't get boxed in a corner by Danzo and Hiruzen. If any change needs to be made, its preventing the Massacre from ever occuring and helping prevent the Uchiha from being discriminated. With Tsunade hopefully influencing the village decisions to recind Tobirama's Uchiha decisions. Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 60 Chapter 59: Danger
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    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
    Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Replied to HankTheFisherMan

    Not any more OP than a certain other child prodigy named "That Man"

    His kenjutsu training is also going well but since he neither spars with anyone in kenjutsu nor trained by a sensei in kenjutsu so he don't know his level in kenjutsu. His genjutsu has become his greatest asset. He can easily put an elite jonin in genjutsu with his three tomoe sharingan and if he uses his mangekyou sharingan, then even a level kage shinobi will have hard time resisting it. His only weakness was his low level chakra.
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    Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke and Dominate Elemental Nation
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Replied to Badtime

    To be fair, with just the Kaleidoscope Will could throw hands and beat all the top 10. You gotta remember that Types from Nasuverse could easily solo DxD and as Zelretch he was able to win that fight against Type-Moon. When it comes down to it, if Will is ever losing he can literally just dip out of the world-line and re-engage whenever it suits him. At this point there really is no narrative tension when it comes to battle, with all the goodies Will has on his own. Truth be told, this fic is primarily a slice of life while exploring the multiverse.

    Ch 246 Interlude 12
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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Replied to chance_isaac

    Eh, he had adult reasoning and lost his parents becoming an orphan again. While Mangekyou is OP... He also loses his eyesight when he uses it making it not as nutty as the EMS, not to mention he wouldn't be able to handle the Chakra usage anyways. It's literally a canon power that is attached to the character MC was isekai'd as when they lose people they care deeply for. Personally I struggle to see how in canon how he didn't go further than 1 tomoe from the massacre but thats just me.

    Next morning he wake up in the hospital, as he thinks about what happened he wanted to cry, his eyes started to watering so he quickly went to the bathroom to hide his tears from nurses that were present. If he was like his previous life he would have cried right there but now he was different person from his previous life. He went to bathroom and wash his face and look in the mirror, as he send chakra to his eyes, it changes into 3 tomoe sharingan and then transform into mangekyou sharingan.
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    Naruto: Reincarnated as Sasuke and Dominate Elemental Nation
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Replied to The4thWAH

    DxD gods are probably faster and more durable in a bigaton way... But both Nasuverse gods and Campione gods are faaar stronger in Conceptual shenanigans which is far more important. Servants from Fate would top out in DxD as Ultimate Class simply due to physical feats not matching DxD in that regard, however they can punch up REALLY well due to conceptual hax. Divine Spirits (Nasu) are magnitudes higher than Servants. Deities like Amaterasu from Fate would solo the entire DxD verse no diff because the raw power and conceptual hax DxD just lacks.

    I killed a god.
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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
    Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Commented

    If a relationship happens, let it happen. Otherwise don't make romance the focus of this fic.

    Ch 28 Chapter 28: Spar
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    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
    Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Posted

    This is... Actually really good! Definitely feeling the Slice of Life vibes with the sweet character interactions. The Wanjie Mall is a very good concept to bring in Out of Context powers with clear defined goals that he has listed. My advice would be to not add in too many characters from other series' to the harem because big harems usually do more harm to the story than good. Harem of maybe 4-5 people would be ideal to keep them well written and relevant in the story. Overall I enjoyed what you had written and can't wait for more!

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    Wanjie Mall - Jaune Arc
    Anime & Comics · Yang_Xiao_Long_Arc
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Commented

    Isn't Odr just a different aspect of Odin? Or is it different in this story with Odr and Odin being separate.

    Ch 14 We are a Team
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    Climbing to Supremacy with a Chat Group
    Anime & Comics · ImmortalVirgin_0980
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Commented

    Honestly? With how his Air Balloon is set up, what's there to be afraid of? He is proclaiming that Zeus is better than Poseidon the whole time he's flying! That level of kiss assery needs to be rewarded.

    Ch 10 [Escape III]
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    Fate/Defiance
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Posted

    Honestly? I don't mind this fics cheat powers. Everything she has, she technically "could" have gotten via bloodlines which makes it a nice change. Here's hoping this fic doesn't turn into the bog standard psychopath self insert power fantasy that 99% of fics like this end up as.

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    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Commented

    Uh oh

    Ch 7 Interlude
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    Fate/Defiance
    Anime & Comics · theMadLad
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Posted

    I really do like this. I feel you capture the characters, especially Vergil, quite well and I am curious to know if any more of Vergil's Devil Abilities will creep over. I can only imagine how broken a Devil Trigger + UBW would be. Gilgamesh who? Hope you update soon anyways. Cheers!

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    Heroic Spirits May Cry (Fate/DmC)
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX1yr
    Replied to AStoryForOne

    Many divine constructs are wielded by mortals though? Dawnbreaker isn't a sword a rando can pickup and use, they need to be Meridia's champion. Very much like Exalibur, with Vivian allowing Artoria to use it. And worst comes to worst and you're really picky, Boosted Gear is a divine contruct so he does have something to hurt Achilles.

    "Nothing personal." I smiled at him, summoning Dawnbreaker from my ring, and stabbed it down at him.
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    A Nascent Kaleidoscope.
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  • Xx_Chump99_xX
    Xx_Chump99_xX2yr
    Commented

    Totally not inspired by the new Batman movie XD. Good stuff, glad to see you back.

    Ch 17 [Vengeance]
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    Fate/Defiance (Old, Rewrite up!)
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