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This is... Actually really good! Definitely feeling the Slice of Life vibes with the sweet character interactions. The Wanjie Mall is a very good concept to bring in Out of Context powers with clear defined goals that he has listed. My advice would be to not add in too many characters from other series' to the harem because big harems usually do more harm to the story than good. Harem of maybe 4-5 people would be ideal to keep them well written and relevant in the story. Overall I enjoyed what you had written and can't wait for more!