Ice_giant_Ymir

the story itself is pretty good, it's also an original idea. the main problem is the fact that it doesn't update almost at all. overall the story is worth a read just don't expect regular updates.

this would be a great novel if it was updated regularly.

the novel is fun for the most part. it has a decent plot and pace but it gets worse with time, and starts to have more unrealistic and fantasy element's. you can clearly see why the Arthur quit because he wrote himself into a corner and jumped the mc tech by about 500 years and gave him a computer.

you do seem to slowly be getting better

you can have the tailiban take power and 911 and the war on terror happen

yes more chapter!

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yay a new chapter

more chapters!!

good chapter