It's a lovely story with a whole lot of comedy and romance. It's so easy to understand. However, the author should work on the flow of sentences a bit more because it was a bit hard to read with many mistakes and vulgar language. Other than that, the story is fun! Keep on updating more!

The beginning already made me laugh out loud. I could immediately tell that this would be fun to read. And now this guy all of a sudden comes into her life like that? Wow!

The start alone was just interesting. I like how the story started like that. Means It's going to be a good read. Maybe with a little more plot development, the story would be even more interesting.

The plot and setting of the story are just relatable and understanding. It's got this depressing setting that hits you. Honestly would like to see more upcoming chapters.

Page turner!

I really don't know what to say. This is a nice read for anyone who enjoys beast wars and incredible fights with blood baths. It even has pictures attached to it, so it helps you picture the story more.

The narrator really did well practicing with his deep voice-over narration

The story is funny. I love how the sisters have this annoying and weird connection they have together... even though they're not really sisters... You can tell that the adventure they're going to have is going to be full of surprises and twists.

Aww

Sure ill change it to a month

Sure.

Wait did he just die here?

Yeah... you better hurry

Yeah...kinda[img=faceslap]

Love the start of it! It's very exciting how you started it!

The book has a very powerful start. The story development is quite slow paced so you can have time to grasp how the characters are. Hoping for more development of the story.

Nice start.

I like how fast-paced and intense it is...with some twists and turns and unbelievable outcomes...it leaves the reader wanting more. Great read.