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The translation is great compared to the other Naruto translation the story for now isn’t that original but the main character is hundred times better than other Naruto main characters i realy hope that there will be more world building and OCs

And i think you should get the amount of kamic piont he gains in order and the things he has to do in order to gain them

I think goblin slayer is better

It feels like a cliche power fantasy fanfic now with hardship for the mc

Yamato , rebellion , jackal , all-black , masamune , master sword , devil sword of sparda , Kusanagi no Tsurugi , Aranrúth , Gúthwinë , Lævateinn , glamdring , samehada , yoru , caster , ryusei , Totsuka blade , Demon Sword Lostvayne , Dragon Slayer ,Chastiefol , punisher , divine axe rhitta

Rewrite please

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