Did he drop this?

I'm curious how frequently, and consistently you'll update it but I love the direction of the story so far. Definitely has potential, keep up the good work.

it used a twilight world, as a description of the world also please kys for liking twilight.

Teuchi is good, Teuchi is great

this and the gamers body is literally copy pasted from the game manhwa

I love your bleach book, keeping up.

I personally always avoided fan-fics, because most of them you see/hear about are absolute garbage. But this is not only the beat fan-fic I've ever read, but one of the best non mainstream novels. The mc's personality is perfect, the long paragraphs which could be turned into short sentences are actually better, because there are more comments to see theories of where the story will go. An absolute masterpiece in terms if a fan novel, 10/10, wish I could wipe my memories to read it again.

You stole the work of vksmanga ofcourse people will complain you can't write your own story so when you try and mix it up it becomes absolute trailer trash

POV: he's rapping

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