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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    If there are grammar issues let me know.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: New Life
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Chapters should come out, every other day, from now on.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: First Day Of Class
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to demigod0414

    You're right, I meant to write Negi( The sound Ninja ) Instead of Nanako, I have a key bind that groups Nanako and Mimiko together, and I wrote this chapter late, so I forgot about it.

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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    I was writing one of the newer chapters, and I thought I should be more precise with this explanation, One can be willingly teleported, or forcefully teleported, if their curse energy doesn't equal Mute's or Yuta's. That's why at the beginning of the story, Mute was able to teleport others into his palm.

    One's body can be teleported, if the recipient wishes for their body to be transported. But even with Yuki's body being transported, Mute had plenty of time to react to her movements, however, her fist couldn't be stopped by Mute's technique. 
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Posted

    I’m going to give myself a totally not biased review of this novel

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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    Just a quick light-hearted chapter, better enjoy it since everything from here on out will be dark. But chapters should come out every two days from here on.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Radio
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to MathGojo

    Gotcha, then in that case you would be correct. But truthfully, I made Yuta use his domain expansion with Yuki, so I didn’t have to describe what it looked like. Because if I described what it looked like and In a few chapters Gege makes Yuta use his domain against Sukuna and it’s complete different . It’ll make this chapter look dumb.

    Ch 119 Chapter 119: Battle For New Strongest.
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to MathGojo

    Wouldn’t of worked due to Mute’s binding vow, that overrides any domain after he survives the one minute. But if Mute had a normal domain this would of worked

    Ch 119 Chapter 119: Battle For New Strongest.
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    P:S I'm hoping you can figure out why this is, but if you can't I'll tell you, or if someone gets it right, I'll like their comment.

    " Ah, a minute passed that quickly. For some reason, that felt faster than usual. But oh well, Domain Expansion: An Act Of Vitality " 
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to DJ_Saenz

    You're correct, that is how it works, but I'll explain how she or they are using the technique on Mute's physical body next chapter.

    Purple light admitted out the powerful orb of energy, illuminating the barren road filled with floating arrows, Mute stared up at the purple orb watching Rika materialize next to the descending Yuta, Mute was about to dash back out of the range of the attack until suddenly the gravity around his body increased ten fold causing his legs to bend. Mute glanced to the left staring at Yuki who was pointing at him until she suddenly grinned and the sound of screaming air entered Mute's ears. 
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    Me after writing this chapter, also let me know if there are any grammar issues.

    Ch 119 Chapter 119: Battle For New Strongest.
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to Barcas

    It more of a caution poster saying there is someone destroying towns, but wanted posters sounded better than caution posters in my opinion

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Bastardly
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    P:S Let me know if there are any grammar issues

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Bastardly
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    P:S Let me know if there are any grammar issues.

    Ch 2 Chapter 3: Final Chance
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    Replied to DaoistxFvdB4

    Mute is a year older but still around the same age

    Ch 118 Chapter 118: Sealing
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to CustomFireblast

    Tell people about the deal.

    Mai pondered, thinking about the bonding vow Mute had just offered her before she let out an eerie grin and nodded agreeing to the conditions of the vow. After seeing Mai nod her head, Mute just grinned and extended his hand out grabbing onto Mai's shoulder before he spoke. 
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    Sorry for the slow start but the novel will speed up from here

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: Otherworldly
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    I’m just going to give myself a totally not biased review of this novel

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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Commented

    I'm going to have to explain a lot of things next chapter, so I apologize if the chapter takes a little longer to come out.

    Ch 104 Chapter 104: Pinnacle Of Sorcery
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  • DaoistJIIvmp
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    Replied to Daoist7EZpg5

    More of writing thing, I wanted to make the battlemore engaging, and if I made it where Mute doesn’t react to the attack at all, it’ll make the attack from Kitla seem pointless to write in

    Ch 96 Chapter 96: Reality Versus Delusion
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