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Hope you have enjoyed, basically, the end of the prologue. The next chapter'll come out later than usual. It'll be a week or two while I finish writing chapters. I have the story fully planned out, as I'm just writing the chapters right now; however, I would like to hear your ideas on how you think the story will play out. - Author.

I might of forgot that Planet Vegeta has two suns

Next Chapter might be a little late. I need to finish planning the next arc.

And if there’s any grammar errors let me know, I focus a lot on the fight scenes to the point where I’ll slip up and write the wrong there or something

Just a shameless self-author review, but I hope you enjoy the story, although it'll be quite different from the original if you have read it before.

Trying something different then the normal dragon ball fights I write let me know if you have any complaints

Hope you enjoyed the chapter.

This is entirely headcanon, by the way. I have no idea if this is true, but I figure that there would be some limitation, or Bill Cipher would have created a force that would instantly defeat/kill Dipper and the others in the show.

There will be more action in, next chapter. I just didn't want an action scene that's roughly two thousand words to drag on for an entire chapter.

Soon, I'm probably going to mass release about twenty or so chapters, and that'll be the end