Yea this is definitely a novel I can get into. Liam is a character that is relatable and likable within the first couple chapter of the novel. The world building is creative and imaginative. I’ll definitely be adding this to my libary.

First time a i seen a novel like this one and I’m impressed how you made everything work. I cant wait to see more only negative would be the pacing the chapters where pretty long 😅.

This is definitely written like a mystery novel. I can see the Aesthetic the novel is going for. The writing quality is great and I really like the supporting characters. I would guess this isn’t your first Novel you wrote just by the quality of everything

I think the writing quality was alright but it was hard to figure out who was talking in some scenes. The over all story and world building are great and there was definitely a lot of throughout maniacs. Definitely will go in my library

This story has a amazing hook. I hope the Arthur posts regularly. The pacing is great and keeps you asking more questions. I’ll definitely try to blow through all these chapter because i have to know what happens😅