Catylang

Gostei da ideia de como refinando o corpo com cultivo o trnseigan desperta.

Yo, I gotta say, I'm really digging this book so far. The setting? Man, it's so well-written, it's like I'm right there. You can tell the author put a lot of thought into crafting this world, and it shows. And let's talk about Jon, our main dude. Love how he's not just some OP (overpowered) character right off the bat. Nah, he's got layers, man. He's well-constructed, and you can see him grow as the story unfolds. It's refreshing to see a character that actually feels real, you know? So yeah, if you're on the fence about picking this up, just do it. You won't regret it.

sorry google translator. kkkkkkkkkkkkkk

I apologize, this is really my first novel, I'm Brazilian, and I don't understand much English, I'm using google, along with a writing AI app, but thanks for the constructive criticism. Another fact mentioned, I really wanted this feeling when I wrote it, of not telling a history lesson, but integrating the information slowly throughout the story.

OMG, I always look for novels, to improve my aspirations, and inspirations, when I try to write, but I always come across novels, and fanfics, that the protagonist is perverted, and that doesn't change anything, naruto's mistake was like Danzo (the guy who literally was behind 70% of the work's disgrace) did what he wanted, at least in this work the author was decent, it was impossible for a person like danzou to be alive or plotting in naruto's world of espionage and power!

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