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That's amazing! thank you for the rev!
Don't worry, I'll drop this fic when I'm dead. Just had a long break, sorry bout that.
I was actually finding a good reason as to why SRA's wouldn't work on him lol, since some reality benders can make it useless. Thanks, you really helped me on this one!
I can help with this; psychologically watching a person using a gun is much different to actually ever holding one. It feels strange to him, yet he knows he has the ability. This will progress further on don't worry.
Yes, yes, I am still new, I haven't really thought about the beginning, but I will fix it in the future chapters!
Yes, I noticed this as well when I reread the chapters. Future chapters won't be like this anymore.
I can't argue with this, this has been a terrible plot mistake for me. I will try to avoid things like this in the future!
Thank you for the review! yes, It was a big mistake on my part, I have taken everyone's consideration for his character, and in the future chaps it'll be much more accurate to the persona of The Lich as the MC isn't currently aware of the fact that the evil nature of The Lich is taking over his mind slowly. It's subtle, but I have been working well for the future chaps! Appreciate the review!
My apologies, I didn't do well with the first chapters, but for the upcoming chapters I'll be putting in more effort for the character. Thanks for the review! I'll do my best for future chaps!
On it! the past few chapters I was experimenting with his personality, so in the future chapters he'll have this personality.