Leo_DiAngelo

I've raised his height over the course of the chapters. However, I think I might make his animal form taller if need be. Just let me know, and I'll put that into consideration.

I make these mistakes all the time lol. Appreciate the corrections

nah I'm bugging when I wrote that 😭😭😭😭

I'll keep that in mind for the future . I appreciate your input on this novel, I love hearing what the readers have to say about various topics that are within the novel.

I hadn't fully looked into the max extent of what Pato could actually do, and Ken was still a beginner with his devil fruit. I wasn't trying to make them look weak as much as I wanted to portray how much they could improve from where they currently were.

Buckingham Study was, but the clone wasn't

initially it was the fish fish fruit: Ghidorah model. But after revision it's called the snake snake fruit Ghidorah model.

The people didn't like it much, so I had to remove it.

I'm not even gonna lie, I been messed up with the timing thing in this story. .. .. please bear with it 😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏

for sure, I never talk about it much cuz I always think y'all ain't interested.