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unless there are hundreds of thousands of trainers every year, this kind of profession would die in less than a few generations so the numbers don't add up considering the background of the vast majority.

plothole, he clearly explained this early in the story.

Awesome!

I beg to differ, it's not the people who don't want to see logic, it's you who's to locked in your bubble to consider their words carefully, just from the comments back there you can see the majority of the readers agree that it wasn't a satisfactory battle and that it could and should have been played better. The problems comes from your lack of understanding of "Sanderson's three laws of magic", you said the fic isn't based on the game and that it takes a more realistic approach, the more realistic approach already exists in form of manga and anime and yet you fail to properly explain how those moves work because you didn't even used them once by that time. And by using the actual logical approach, their arguments are as a matter of fact, much more prone to reality than that of the biased author because that's how authors are. Game of thrones, Harry Potter, Wheel of time, etc, they all have similar problems, you would do well to recognize that you aren't perfect and at least accept their opinion instead of complaining. Not saying you have to agree with them, but you should be more open minded. But of course, that's referring only to actual criticism, those derogatory comments are actually something to despise and delete as they don't add anything both to the community and you as an author. Good job and keep writing, I like your fic despite some problems.

neither because the 'real' version is from anime and manga and yet he changes how they work.

this is not part of the anime, it's a fanfic thing.

what...? She doesn't even know his name... How will she take revenge? Curse him before sleeping?