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Spoilers ahead read at your own caution this doesn’t even deserve my disappointment Pros -Good grammar -stable updates cons a naive bitch of an mc who feels guilt over every evil act he does, when this world. Is a world of survival of the fittest. It feels like I'm reading a dairy of middle age man that has an existential crisis (he was is 30 before he was reincarnated) his not a child goddamit Let's not even talk about the fact every fucking time this mf gets into a situation, he either gets enslaved or has to do something he doesn’t want to like wtf is this your way of character developing the mc, then it is utter trash there are plenty of ways to character development but this isn't it example one He gets forced to marry a girl by her father. The goes demon time and kills her father and her brothers, leaves after that 6500years later (Mc was sleeping inside a chamber) That is just another way of nerfing the mc. Like he can grow so much faster back in the day. Without technology and laws in his way, let's not even talk about everyone having apparently had a system. even tho it's not as op as his it's very versatile. For example, his roommate has a system, that can make it so that he sees whatever his target sees. Short version Sees the girl (he married) sister and let her beat him up and make him her daughter's servant (which forced him to be with her surviving weeks inside some forest) He could have fought back but just didn’t, because he felt like he owed her sister. And know he is emotionally traumatized because of some chick, that had is babies die. and the babies died to U can read it if u want, i said what i said ain’t gonna take back

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classy_fiedAuthorclassy_fied

thank you, and I appreciate you being honest.

weirdguy2022:Good luck on your journey as a writer
weirdguy2022
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Forgot he apparently cant resist very beautiful women, will be his downfall

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classy_fiedAuthorclassy_fied

thanks for the feedback, I hope I can use it to improve, no hard feelings I appreciate the honesty.

weirdguy2022
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Good luck on your journey as a writer

classy_fied:thanks for the feedback, I hope I can use it to improve, no hard feelings I appreciate the honesty.