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Mark_Zender

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2021-05-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    Is feX her only brother?

    "Tell me, why did you do it...why did you do it….brother."
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    Simultaneously = at the same time, or is that simultaneously (squared)

    Above, there were ten platforms, allowing for there to be ten fights happening simultaneously at the same time. The fighting event was one of the most important and most significant events so they needed not to have too much going on at the same time. Their goal was to allow the students to display their powers and if all the students were to fight at the same time, it would be impossible to keep track of them all.
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    That's the real question, isn't it? Does each personality have an ability?

    "He has your ice abilities as well!" Layla said, "That's three abilities, just how strong is Vorden really!?"
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    what is the meaning of his face dropping?

    For a split second, Quinn thought he had seen Vorden's face drop, but when he blinked and looked again, it was completely normal.
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    this implies he's seen gore like this before

    The room looked like a prison cell brawl gone bad. Inside was the top half of Ian's body on the floor, blood still oozing from the bottom half and his gut's spilling out. If Vorden had never seen a scene like this before, it would cause a normal person to throw up all over the place.
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    love the twists and turns of the story

    [Evolution process has begun!]
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    I love the twists in the plot line!

    "Agent 83, what seems to be the problem?" A voice said from the ball. "Is it to do with the mission?"
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Replied to MikaDaemon

    Agreed

    Ch 82 The search for a Rat
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    Nice progression short chapters can be frustrating

    Ch 82 The search for a Rat
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Replied to Knee_Jerk

    I agree!

    "That's the storage room." Ian answered, "I doubt the portal would be inside there, usually those places get targeted by thieves and such so they tend to not make the portal area so obvious and even if it was in there, it would be best if we let the beast leave first. The way I am now I would stand no chance against the thing."
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    good idea!

    "That's the storage room." Ian answered, "I doubt the portal would be inside there, usually those places get targeted by thieves and such so they tend to not make the portal area so obvious and even if it was in there, it would be best if we let the beast leave first. The way I am now I would stand no chance against the thing."
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Replied to UCanDOITReallyhard

    I agree!

    "Will you shut up, unless you want to fight the damned thing instead?"
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    The interplay between personalities is interesting. nice insight into character roles within a character.

    "Will you shut up, unless you want to fight the damned thing instead?"
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    of course he's from a powerful family. interested in seeing what his multiple personalities do and how they apply to his power

    "Him again," After the incident with the second years, Nathan decided to look into Vorden's family background a bit more, and if they were to find out, this would be bad news. "Make sure his family doesn't learn anything, we have to keep this a secret for as long as we can."
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    great chapter

    Ch 65 Teleporting
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    cool concept

    When teleportation devices were first discovered there was hope that they would be able to set these to travel to wherever they wanted to. At last, the idea of colonizing planets such as mars was a dream come true.
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    love watching the progression of his skills

    < Congratulations, Blood swipe has reached Lv. 2 >
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    Brutal character

    "Two minutes late means two fingers I'm afraid." Earl then held one of Peter's fingers.
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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Posted

    Really enjoying the character development and the progression of the chapters Short chapters for quick bites of info then a change in story line. Reminds me of Dan Brown and his adventure stories.

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  • Mark_Zender
    Mark_Zender2yr
    Commented

    I love the direction this is heading...

    Ch 64 Fight back!
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