Puzzler

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I read all 40 chapters in one sitting and wish there was more. Disappointed that it is on hiatus, but hop for more in the future. There is something oddly satisfying about someone constantly humiliated and bullied getting such immediate and powerful revenge, even if it is predictable at times. I really hope that the author adds more soon.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I love the story, it really drew me in and kept me reading. As for the writing quality, the author really needs to have someone proofread the chapters because spelling and grammar are ongoing issues. I have to wonder if english is the primary language. Not that its much harder to read, as you can usually understand what is trying to be said when the occasional issues occur, but nearly every chapter has an issue or two. If he is reading these comments, I'd gladly offer my services for free on this point, as I really like the story and think it may keep some people from enjoying it fully. Bottom line, even as much as that type of thing typically annoys me, the story is good enough that I am willing to overlook it, which says alot.