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Sudeept_Guchhait2dReplied to BalsamicThunThighsCh 79 Sealing the demon!detailObtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!Fantasy ¡ WinterDragon_1- Sudeept_Guchhait4dCommented
this type of content is what is required in ur novel, and u did a great job. keep up
Under the relentless tearing and biting of the zombies, blood and flesh splattered everywhere. Rick's bloodshot eyes gradually lost their color... - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthCommented
hey author mc is still neive and stupid he believes he has to return the favor eveytime someone does something for him.
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- Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to Suryaada
hi
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man I think u should use some editor tools to fix ur sentences of the novel there r many mistakes in each sentences like names, relationships. he or she so use more editor tool to fix it. ur novel has potential but these small mistakes r bringing it down.
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fixed this sentence
Ummmm!~~" Gongsun Wan'er's muffled moans echoed in her mother's room, as his cock entered her. Her mother's body shook violently when Shi Tian's penis reached deep inside her womb, Shi Tian had now reached her mother's womb with kissed him deeply, and he started moving his hips back and forth and increasing his speed as time went on. - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthCommented
man mother and son not daughter. plz correct ur sentences
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man plz correct ur sentences between he and she. it is confusing to read. I can't understand which pov i am reading.
At first, he was a little confused, and didn't understand what was going on. However, he did not make any sound or movement because he did not want to embarrass her. - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthCommented
there should be man but mostly women so that he can conquer them and make them his personal slavesđđ. and man u should create some protoganist like characters who will give him a tough fight. but not the typical arrogent ones but sharp minded and cunning.
I don't usually get a lot of comments or feedback so I am writing this to ask ur opinion. I wanna add a bit more fantasy/supernatural element to this story, maybe some other characters who have different superpowers, do you guys like this idea? Tell me what you think. - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthCommentedCh 14 14.
- Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to SleepDeprivedSloth
can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
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can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
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can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
*Breezy's Picture*Â - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to
can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
*Breezy's Picture*Â - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to
can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
*Breezy's Picture*Â - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to
can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
*Breezy's Picture*Â - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to
can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
*Breezy's Picture*Â - Sudeept_Guchhait5mthReplied to
can't do that until u change ur mind. atleast add 2 more plz
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