Tanial

bruh no this one's great

reading this chapter felt like the quality of this novel fell by a 1000 points...

Ayo code geass in there...

It's just such a shame Noah (original Lucas) succeeded in killing the author ;(

end justify the means right?

i am pretty sure this is going to be some bullshit about the new age conspiracy her father is part of and thus he instructed her to have obsidian's seed (child) in her or something along those lines... man I really want to drop this book as of rn

author i read that you haven't signed the contract yet, my suggestion to you would be to also publish this book on some other site like royalroad and create a patreon or something for early access of advanced chapters. just a suggestion tho... also i checked your other book that one's fantastic (even better than this tbh) I was wondering why you dropped it?

this book is honestly a gem, from charters to world building everything is just great. it starts from a very common trope but you can just feel how it's going to evolve into a totally great adventure. this one is far above the average webnovel standard 5/5 easy.

A splendid start, i have a feeling this novel would be great.... will change my review accordingly.

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