The MC is logging out soon, so it's a surprise until then.

Yes. I'm planning on making it a common thing. But I do not want a Race to be particularly powerful. Everything has t have an advantage and a disadvantage. Same for Classes. But we'll get there later.

Maybe today and definitely tomorrow.

I'll spend some time editing that. Thank you and keep reading!

Thank you for your input. This is my first book so I'm still working on how to write. Would you be able to give me an example in one of the chapters I've written? Thank you!

Awesome writing. The world background is amazingly complex and I really like the cultivation system. However, while I like the character and I appreciate the story, to me Ryu is stagnating in his character development. His arrogance does not entirely befit his strength and while it was refreshing at the beginning of the story, now it seems kind of stupid, as he keeps on getting in situations he cannot always respond to or handle well. The story development is stalling a bit alongside them and I would love to see some growth in Ryu's character, just like when Ailsa changed some of his views on the world.