Review Detail of Creativityiskey in Dark Player: The Death Knight

Item: Dark Player: The Death Knight
Rating: 3.8

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CreativityiskeyLv1310mthCreativityiskey

This is a good book author the only thing I don’t is you don’t break up the sentences when you don’t break them up it makes people lose interest that’s all I got to say but keep continuing please!

Dark Player: The Death Knight

Shadelicht

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ShadelichtAuthorShadelicht

Thank you for your input. This is my first book so I'm still working on how to write. Would you be able to give me an example in one of the chapters I've written? Thank you!

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CreativityiskeyLv13Creativityiskey

I forgot to mention you might wanna slow down a bit because you are going a bit fast 💨

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CreativityiskeyLv13Creativityiskey

If you look at one of your chapters do you see how long one of paragraphs are it would be great if you didn’t make it that long like split it every now and then!

Shadelicht:Thank you for your input. This is my first book so I'm still working on how to write. Would you be able to give me an example in one of the chapters I've written? Thank you!

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ShadelichtAuthorShadelicht

I'll spend some time editing that. Thank you and keep reading!

Creativityiskey:If you look at one of your chapters do you see how long one of paragraphs are it would be great if you didn’t make it that long like split it every now and then!

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CreativityiskeyLv13Creativityiskey

Thank u will upload another chapter today or tomorrow?

Shadelicht:I'll spend some time editing that. Thank you and keep reading!

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ShadelichtAuthorShadelicht

Maybe today and definitely tomorrow.

Creativityiskey:Thank u will upload another chapter today or tomorrow?

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CreativityiskeyLv13Creativityiskey

Great please don’t quit on this book I see amazing potential

Shadelicht:Maybe today and definitely tomorrow.

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