This is a good book author the only thing I don’t is you don’t break up the sentences when you don’t break them up it makes people lose interest that’s all I got to say but keep continuing please!
Shadelicht
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LIKEIf you look at one of your chapters do you see how long one of paragraphs are it would be great if you didn’t make it that long like split it every now and then!
Shadelicht:Thank you for your input. This is my first book so I'm still working on how to write. Would you be able to give me an example in one of the chapters I've written? Thank you!
Creativityiskey:If you look at one of your chapters do you see how long one of paragraphs are it would be great if you didn’t make it that long like split it every now and then!
Shadelicht:I'll spend some time editing that. Thank you and keep reading!