TheVoidDevil
There exists a certain land, where nothing and everything become one - the void.
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It'll come in the next or the chapter after that. The cultivation is important but I think the scene needs to 'flow' in naturally towards that. After those few more chapters will be cultivation and other things so, hang in there for a chapter or two ;)
Hello there! Author here to rate this as a 5-star masterpiece, what else? Anyways, this work is inspired and has a lot of influence from various martial arts novels that I've read in the past (one could say I have the 'mastery' of reading those novels, as for writing... that's another story). The novel follows a pair of six-year-old children (as of now) as they walk The Devil's Path through the strange world. The rules of this world will vary from those we, as humans, know—therefore, don't be surprised when you come across something like that. Another thing - the novel will be VERY visually descriptive, including fighting scenes, adult scenes and everything of importance that happens. Many things will be unfamiliar as you first come across them, but worry not if you don't understand something - it will surely be explained in the future chapters. If you're temporarily confused, that's how protagonist feels in reality as well so, you get a first-hand reading experience ;) Although the novel has a harem tag, don't expect it to be any shallow gathering of women, that's not the direction I intend to go in. The novel will be very relationship-building focused (friends, family, harem members, etc). If you have any doubts, ideas, suggestions - I await for your arrival in the comments section. Don't be shy to drop a review if you like the novel - it will help tremendously with every review it receives. Wish you happy reading! All the best (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
It's intentionally left unexplained and will be explained in the future chapters but if you want a spoiler, here goes. ⚠️ SPOILERS BELOW! ⚠️ . . . . She's a Fated Soul born by chance in Asura's life on Earth. In the first chapter after the prologue, the illusory seed with a hundred different-colored wisps is that Fated Soul and because of its power, the hundred curses were used to seal it (the chains containing the souls of past gods). That Fated Soul was present within him even before he reincarnated and is created by his unique mentality, which is why Fate had chosen him for the very inportant mission in the new world (Spirit Realm). I don't want to spoil too much for those who read spoilers but this should be just enough to clear the doubts and tickle the curiosity, I think...
This story seems interesting, the writing style is a novelty to me so I'm not used to it still, but it's not in a bad sense. It just takes time to get used to a different writing style. There are some unique and interesting ideas hidden in it but I won't be going into details for obvious reasons. The English is satisfying enough to fluidly read, or at least I had no troubles with it. All in all, it is worth giving a try!