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So far, pretty amazing! I love the premise of a first person book and how the main character doesn't talent, but we all know that the main character does have talent (we just don't know when it will appear.) I don't know mucj but about the world background but the character design is pretty 'un mature, kid-like, naive." I don't know. Maybe the main character will grow.
Writing Quality is meh, just a few mistakes here and there. Everyone has that problem. Stability of Updates... I have seen many comments of screwing up people's privildges but otherwise than that, I think its not too bad. Story Development is pretty good, I can see how the story progresses and how the main character gets stronger by the chapter. Although, I don't like how slow the main character gets stronger but thats just based off my preference. Character design is not bad. He seems courageous but at the same time, slightly calculative. World background is not too bad. It slightly stands out compared to other webnovel where there is more gods and blessing premise. So, In short its pretty good (if you ignore all those spam comments) Also, this is such a coincidence.
Writing quality is quite good, I feel like he uses a lot of unique words and compares certain topics with something else to help us understand. It updates every single day, once per day. Though I'm not too sure when. Story development is good because we can see the story progress and there is already a bit of character development. Character design is fresh and unique. He's like a child who probably didn't have a proper childhood but at the same time, he seems to have high intelligence. World background is not really known. We do know that this is an age of mana, new technology and powers?? Though its only 5 chaps so far so maybe more will be revealed
I love the story, keep it up!