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First of all, your novel has an auxiliary chapter that contains information and keys about the novel, which was helpful to understand the novel. I can't put it into words, but I can say that the story's start is good. Keep this up and good luck on your writing journey. I feel sorry for Grandpa Makoto's loss, though.
Hello, I am "Takemoto_" which is the author of this novel. I rated my novel "5 star". I know it's kinda bad rating yourself but I need to. The thing that I can say is that Please support my novel. As soon as the story goes to its PLOT, you guys will find it interesting. Next thing that you will know is that you're thrilled to it, hehe. Oh, by the way, here is my other artwork for the MC of this novel "Kayamura Shin". (ps. I am not a good artist so bare with it.)