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Its not that he cure more like release the burden Ạjak would simply erase her entirely back to the world forge ready for the next mission after earth in contrast pluto simply erase her past lives relieving the burden on her brain but allowing her to keep her current memories
This is good in terms of development, the character is describe in details but not much that it leaves no room for development As for guns and firearms concepts, it's ok but I hope you don't overdo it as many other have done the same and they even brought in many futureristic weapons that it makes the story go insane I would recommend to focus more the development of Dorne rather than just weapen, how they can use sand to create glass and perhaps dive into their Rhony past ancestry.
In my opinion, the author has done a fantastic job. In terms of character, Pluto is slowly becoming disillusion, one of the few things i see many OC struggle is to realise the world they are in is real not simply a comic or film. He is not forgetting his past life put he realising his way of thinking needs to change, being immortal does this to a person. I have read comment on how Pluto is stagnant but I disagree as he is not he slowly truly living the story. Most of the time OC is scare of changing the timeline, as for holding hatred to OOA, it's unnecessary, remember Pluto had a choice , OOA didn't just stuff into a new body, he was given a choice to continue even after knowing his death. It's not about his past life , its about the struggle between nature and living. Remember all Eternals are robot by birth,but they also have emotion. Perhaps a bit of this nature affect Pluto line of thought but not entirely. It is the programming of Arishem . The story is about how Pluto struggle to escape the Clestials controls and programmings.