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is it not the experience he gained just now is 50?? why only 1??

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

is an F no a F.. u spoke about grammar.. but meh

then u go to his parents now. go inside this fiction novels.. just enjoy dude for godsake

can u guys dont be such busybody?? for godsake.. this is just fictional story!! also its fanfic.. damn asshole.. dont blame author.. u dont like?? dont read it.. cutia

its story.. for godsake

can you guys just shut up?? if u dont like the way author write.. then support him.. pay him so he can buy dictionary or something similar.. dont just judge too much..

i dont know.. why appocalypse kind of novel always problem with human?? just make MC more direct dude.. tsk tsk.. troublesome.. even for some plot.. why dont u try increasing plot about leveling,new monster,and such?? here some of my idea.. for getting new plot by abandoning some thinking about saving people he dont need,just increase more time for action,then u can go directly for more like shelter building.. so when u got that fixed u then get more about world outside.. also its fine for side chara to be litle soft but please dude, sometimes when u read this kind of novels do u ever think like "why dont u just tell to rebbeca to not being too soft,u dont know what kind of people ure trying to safe?" something like that kind of thought,so just make it more realistic. better ur shaped more for side chara right?? its still soft but at least side chara got more sense.. ITS APOCALYPSE, everything isnt the same.. thats it..