Tumelo566
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Tumelo5664mthReplied to Vidhan_BhardwajI see. thanks, I'll do some adjustments to my writing!![img=strong][img=Feeling it]
That being said, Jacob could see how sad Penelope is, how sad she must have been the past years, the bitterness in her eyes and the mockery lingering in her charming voice. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her. and was a little angry at Dr Saltzman for doing whatever he did. He felt the urge to go and interrogate Dr saltzman. But then again, he wasn't there, he didn't know what happened and the reason behind his actions so the best he could do presently was to comfort Penelope ( of course he wished he could comfort through mouth to mouth but Penelope would burn his fucken Lips off )- Tumelo5664mthReplied to
so childish story telling is better, atleast for fanfic?!
That being said, Jacob could see how sad Penelope is, how sad she must have been the past years, the bitterness in her eyes and the mockery lingering in her charming voice. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her. and was a little angry at Dr Saltzman for doing whatever he did. He felt the urge to go and interrogate Dr saltzman. But then again, he wasn't there, he didn't know what happened and the reason behind his actions so the best he could do presently was to comfort Penelope ( of course he wished he could comfort through mouth to mouth but Penelope would burn his fucken Lips off ) - Tumelo5664mthReplied to create_end
I am using AI to rewrite my paragraphs in a "better" english. I am bad at English and my story telling is very basic and childish. (or so I thought)
That being said, Jacob could see how sad Penelope is, how sad she must have been the past years, the bitterness in her eyes and the mockery lingering in her charming voice. He couldn't help but feel sorry for her. and was a little angry at Dr Saltzman for doing whatever he did. He felt the urge to go and interrogate Dr saltzman. But then again, he wasn't there, he didn't know what happened and the reason behind his actions so the best he could do presently was to comfort Penelope ( of course he wished he could comfort through mouth to mouth but Penelope would burn his fucken Lips off ) - Tumelo5665mthReplied to TrueMonarch00Ch 17 Chapter 16
- Tumelo5665mthReplied to Benoit_Valtin
don't know what you're talking about, man.the story goes like this: the MC got the memories of his previous 23 year old self who was developing a chip of some soft, as a result of this mind-transmigration his mind evolved to this IT mindset. so essentially the mc is still just a teenager. and point number 2, I never said anything about him not being happy in his previous life. the next point regarding the mc powers: the mc was a warlock initially, he just couldn't get access to his mana flow. the 3 years time skip, is where he learnt how to be a warlock and was taught Rune magic and the likes.the final point about him being happy: my answer to you is that you didn't really read this novel to understand/enjoy by just to criticism and criticism nonsense. cause if you did you'd understand why he's happy to be among other children of his age than being alone in the forest. as for the girls, man, who wouldn't wanna flirt around with 17 year old beautiful girls. so I suggest you go back, read the novel, come up with some better criticism that can help improve my reading or Go fuck yourself!
- Tumelo5665mthReplied to Vidhan_BhardwajCh 14 Chapter 13
- Tumelo5665mthReplied to Vidhan_Bhardwaj
tell me what you're thinking .
Jacob was struck by a profound realization, his eyes widening in astonishment as the implications of his thoughts raced through his mind. His heart thumped with excitement, sensing the gravity of the idea taking shape within him. "Maybe," he murmured to himself, a glint of unwavering determination gleaming in his eyes, "divinity might just be a highly refined version of Qi or mana." - Tumelo5665mthReplied to Vidhan_BhardwajCh 14 Chapter 13
- Tumelo5665mthReplied to EloklaCh 14 Chapter 13
- Tumelo5666mthReplied to Vidhan_BhardwajCh 1 chapter 1
- Tumelo5666mthReplied to Creator_of_Chaos
yes, I'm watching them
[Race: human(half-witch) - Tumelo5666mthReplied to Vidhan_BhardwajCh 1 chapter 1
- Tumelo5666mthReplied to eurosCh 10 chapter 9
- Tumelo5666mthReplied to Ronin46
well, if he decides to be with hope then that's not a problem since he's evolving
[Race: human(half-witch) - Tumelo5666mthReplied to Ronin46
what you mean?
[Race: human(half-witch)