Review Detail of Benoit_Valtin in I am in legacies
Review detail
after reading the first 16 chapters I am now going to make an objective review: it is very poorly constructed, we go from a guy who knows nothing to do except say that he is 23 years old and that he is tired of it where he is a guy who is happy to be where he is suddenly we don't really know why he becomes happy. we go from a guy who has almost no powers to a guy who does, then to a guy who has powers and knows how to use them and we never get any explanation of how that happens. without forgetting that the hero is over 27 when he arrives at school, and that he will start going out with 17 year old girls, well done.
I am in legacies
Tumelo566
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don't know what you're talking about, man.the story goes like this: the MC got the memories of his previous 23 year old self who was developing a chip of some soft, as a result of this mind-transmigration his mind evolved to this IT mindset. so essentially the mc is still just a teenager. and point number 2, I never said anything about him not being happy in his previous life. the next point regarding the mc powers: the mc was a warlock initially, he just couldn't get access to his mana flow. the 3 years time skip, is where he learnt how to be a warlock and was taught Rune magic and the likes.the final point about him being happy: my answer to you is that you didn't really read this novel to understand/enjoy by just to criticism and criticism nonsense. cause if you did you'd understand why he's happy to be among other children of his age than being alone in the forest. as for the girls, man, who wouldn't wanna flirt around with 17 year old beautiful girls. so I suggest you go back, read the novel, come up with some better criticism that can help improve my reading or Go fuck yourself!