Andouh
Hi there :) I love to read and i love to write.
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I think he says "Don't be afraid", right? :)
Fun fact: At first i thought "What's wrong with her?", but now i think "You're a jerk, Theo!" It's a nice twist. Im excited to know how she will take in her new surroundings. To be honest, I wasn't sure I would like the story. But now I notice that it's just so different and that I was way too used to this alpha stereotype :)
I like your writing style very much. Thumbs up :) Only one point confused me a bit. She seems so untouched by all of the events. I mean, she's being hunted and almost killed several times and instead of reacting logically like yelling for help, running home like the devil is after her, panicking, calling the police, she's checking her massages and is amused ... Hmmm ... It seems a little off. But I like your story so far, so I'm excited to see what's to come.
I was so board of all the storys where the charakters got interrupted the moment they started to be intimate! I was really anoyed. Sorry, but it is just totally absurd that someone will wait to mate for 10 years (overlly dramatically) especially, when this person harbours a beast (or whatever) with animalistic instincts. But finally here i see Development :) And a goog storyline (not just coincidences and interruptions at every corner). Reading your book is fun! Thanks for your hard work.