Dr_Pepper_0185

don't read stuff about superman then lol

please stop making fan fiction of literal incest porn games. One was sad, and two is too much.

bad book, and guess what? He pads the word count with like 10k nothings on a page.

fun and a solid fan fiction, don't lose encouragement author! you have fans already :)

man creator your a fuckin ass. you deleted the WHOLE story to go on a break? why?

your writing style is weird and the way you're going about his powers and progress is annoying man nobody wants to read about a 4 year old monstrosity

reviews over hyped this for me, what I got was messed up pro nouns and a sloppy story that can't explain why anything is happening except "because" writer fumbled hard.

I can't help but skip any parts with the little girl it's doesn't feel real and even if I try to rationalize with the mc his decision is so dumb it's out of character idk man this seems like a weird hill to die on? dropping if you can't see sense.

why are you so annoying? off yourself.

I love that people are bitching that it's stolen but are you really gonna translate this story from Russian yourself? no so I'm glad this guy is.