It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️ It's good and I need more 👍🏻☺️

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The Translation is good to me, and the world building is good to me and please make a chap more! ==============================================

[img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=coins][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

This fanfic is good👌 a Tokyo ghoul fanfiction ma men! and have Blacklight Virus from Prototype, Mah Best Game ever to me lol when I was 13😅. seing this makes me want to donate lol. okay okay let's move to the real reason: 1)the translation is good to me tbh but there's a mistake but it's readable so I will give it 5 🌟 compare it to kikicrmkia this is okay. 2)the Character design...meh..let's just say 4.5🌟 this is just temporary because it didn't past to 20 chap. 3)the world building is okay being in Tokyo Ghoul that just need "Kagune"and it's multeversal hopping and it's Chinese Author so we all know that's what will Author will do to yato. 4) Story Development? let's just say 4🌟 because it's just Beginning so will dont know what Author will do. and that's all will a say to this fanfic for "now" I will make a new review if there's a mistake to the world development and world background 👌😁

I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!I'm the greatest EXP in the multi universe! and this fanfic is the greatest of all fanfic!

Ajjahshajjajajshbhahajjajsjsjsjjajajannsbshjsjansbshhajajannshheyeyysyshhshababbabbabsbbshhshhahahhsshhshshhahahhsbsbhshayuwjenndjsiiakakmahsyeyuwiaaoksndjdixoxnabehidkxnshejjsjs

[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Idk But you just need to change a little thing in every chap you make, you didn't need change everything. in the first chapter it have so many Error like it didn't have a space or (.). just change the errors and the readers will be happy😂

More! 😂 I want more!!

it will be a good fanfic if you change the mistake like the pov thing change it to ( POV: Name ) ←like this and the system you got

if you want I can be your editor

this is good but author you need an Editor there's too many mistake and bad Grammar . . ........ ......... ......... ......... ........ . .

this is kinda disappointed me, he say elena will be his first time to seggs but for me Pixie (I forgot her name )is Good tho😂

owh... mah boi was worried 😂

this comment is just to increase the rate of this fanfic so that many can read it ______________________________________________________________________

More☺️ More☺️ More☺️ More☺️ More☺️ More☺️ More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️More☺️ More☺️ More☺️