Review Detail of lSin_Of_Pridel in Reborn as a celestial in marvel

Item: Reborn as a celestial in marvel
Rating: 4.4

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lSin_Of_PridelLv13yrlSin_Of_Pridel

this is good but author you need an Editor there's too many mistake and bad Grammar . . ........ ......... ......... ......... ........ . .

Reborn as a celestial in marvel

Jkxngxz

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lSin_Of_PridelLv1lSin_Of_Pridel

if you want I can be your editor

3yr

JkxngxzAuthorJkxngxz

Yes that would be awesome but how would that work?

3yr

lSin_Of_PridelLv1lSin_Of_Pridel

it will be a good fanfic if you change the mistake like the pov thing change it to ( POV: Name ) ←like this and the system you got

Jkxngxz:Yes that would be awesome but how would that work?

3yr

lSin_Of_PridelLv1lSin_Of_Pridel

Idk But you just need to change a little thing in every chap you make, you didn't need change everything. in the first chapter it have so many Error like it didn't have a space or (.). just change the errors and the readers will be happy😂

Jkxngxz:Yes that would be awesome but how would that work?

3yr