Review Detail of lSin_Of_Pridel in |{[Stop5]}|

This fanfic is good👌 a Tokyo ghoul fanfiction ma men! and have Blacklight Virus from Prototype, Mah Best Game ever to me lol when I was 13😅. seing this makes me want to donate lol. okay okay let's move to the real reason: 1)the translation is good to me tbh but there's a mistake but it's readable so I will give it 5 🌟 compare it to kikicrmkia this is okay. 2)the Character design...meh..let's just say 4.5🌟 this is just temporary because it didn't past to 20 chap. 3)the world building is okay being in Tokyo Ghoul that just need "Kagune"and it's multeversal hopping and it's Chinese Author so we all know that's what will Author will do to yato. 4) Story Development? let's just say 4🌟 because it's just Beginning so will dont know what Author will do. and that's all will a say to this fanfic for "now" I will make a new review if there's a mistake to the world development and world background 👌😁