Great writing! The plot is interesting although I don't usually read BL. Good job writing such a story. This story has so much potential. I hope we see more of this novel

I find this story good because of how well this is written making me feel as if I was part of the story. The story progressed fast showing the different conflicts that their love was facing. However, I hope the chapters would be longer. I think it would be better if a lot of things happens in a chapter too.

So far everything is good. The writing quality is okay but I need more chapters to see to be able to write a detailed review. All I can say for now is that the story has great potential because of its interesting plot. I hope the author updates soon <3

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That was a good read! The writing quality is exceptional and the plot is interesting too! I wish I could read more. I'm excited about Sorin's journey in fulfilling his revenge toward those who did him wrong. I could tell just with a few chapters that this will be a good story.

Personally, I could say that the plot is interesting as well as the MC's character. These kinds of character design interest me the most and I bet others will find it interesting too. My only concern is the writing quality of the book. I suggest not using multiple punctuation marks and paying attention to your grammar, capitalization, etc for reader better reading experience.

Thank you so much <3

Thank you for your feedback! That was done on purpose so that the readers would know what was about to happen. In that manner, they'll be curious to learn how or why it happened, as well as how the MC will make her final decisions. The novel will depict how the plot will gradually unfold, revealing numerous mysteries in the future that will shape each and every character. More challenges will come and you'll learn that the story is more than just what it is told.

So far so good. I really liked thr prologue. Just a little improvement in writing quality and all will be good. Overall I like the book!

thank you so much for the detailed review! I appreciate your support to my novel. Please stay tuned!

Hii, author here. I’d just leave a shameless book review and also to interact with my readers. I don’t have much experience in writing a romance novel since I do cringe at romantic stuff but here I am trying my best to write one and I think I’m doing a good job although I’m sure I’m lacking. But I assure you this story will not disappoint as I continue finding and learning new ways to tell the story. I hope you give it a try because I know some of you would relate to the MC. Thank you so much!

First and foremost, I like the idea set in the story. It is intriguing but the writing quality could be better. The author needs to work on the proper use of punctuation and consistency in POV. BUt then again, it's too early to leave a review for the character design, stability of updates and story development. One thing is for sure, this story has great potential. Job well done Author!

thank you so much for the support

Hi, I've read the first few chapters of the stories, and here's my review. First of all, the writing quality needs to be improved from the grammar, and proper usage of punctuation marks. I've seen typos that need to be edited. The character design and story development are good so far as well as the world background. Lastly, it would nice if the chapters are longer. Overall, the story has great potential. Just needs a little improvement. Good job author

First of all, I'd like to say that I enjoyed how the story progressed. I just noticed in the first few chapters that I've read that the author loved using *smash* and *water splash*. And I think it would be best if you'd just describe it instead like for example, "She heard a loud sound that echoed in the four corners of the room". Second, the author needs to work on the proper use of punctuation. Avoid using too many "!" Lastly, the grammatical errors and typographical errors. So far I could say that the story has good potential. Keep working. You are doing a great job so far.

The narrative is well-written and the characters are intriguing. It would keep you wondering what would happen to the MC as the story goes on. I would love to see how the stroy would end. Love it!

The idea of the story is good and interesting. My only concern are the grammatical errors, and use of punctuations which I know you can improve over time. Good job author! your book has potential

I’m impressed by how the story is written. It keeps me hooked in the story as I keep wondering what’s gonna happen next. Good job writing such a excellent piece! 🤍

Hi! I'm the author of this book. This is my first romance book, so it's not among the best you'd ever read, but I guarantee you that I'm continuously striving to improve my writing style and surprise you in unexpected ways. I hope you'll stick around because I'm sure you'll like learning about the backstories of each character.

This is the finest new book I've read so far. The global setting, as well as the characters, are well-written. I have nothing else to say than "OUTSTANDING" Please continue to write! I'd definitely continue reading this!