Dope, I was never really a fan of AoA so I didn't really want to read this but I'll give it a try.

Is this a Age of Adepts fan fic?

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I think if you downloaded the app(I think). I only read webnovel on the website.

This is just a fun read. There's a bunch I want to write but I can't seem to sum it up so just know that the grammar get's better. That it follows the walking dead storyline but doesn't write every little thing that happen in the story, it just sums up what happened in the series so we get refreshed, so we can fit the new scenes with the moment it happened in the series(I hope that made sense) Also the character is just a cool guy doing basically everything right. To big events, to little events like picking up the tools off the roof and weapons off the street.

I read both of Ni Cang Tian works, God of slaughter and Great Demon King. Both I thought were pretty bad, but there was always something about them that made me keep on reading. It could be the power systems or the world building but none the less I read them. So I'm very interested to see GoS having a fanfic, I always wanted to write a fanfic about GDK. I'll write an actual review once there's more chapters, just wanted to write this.

Why didn't you use the ice world bloodline, to try and advances lita to rank 5? Do you have other plans with it?

You can't really go wrong with a character like mary. Quick question, does she have a real bodied or is she just a soul?

First: It's not consistent strong emotions over time that'll upgrade the sharingan. It's one big burst of hatred or sadness. Second: there's limitations to the sharingan, like said in pervious chapters his limit was two tomoe, Also If he had limitless talent like Obito he still wouldn't use hatred or sadness to upgrade his sharingan because he has an alternative way that's way better then that. As I write this down, I can't help it to think that you were joking, but I'll still reply.

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I didn't really like freya so I alright with this.

I don't know if I want to read this, There isn't any negative reviews so either it's that good or deleted, I'm leading to the latter. I also read very little but can't get into it, so can someone give me a detailed also a little spoiler review in the replies. Also if you like it, tell me what you like and dislike about it and if you didn't like it, tell me what you liked about it and didn't. There's just no In-depth review just people saying "just read it, it's good". To the description to the fans base, it all seems a little child like.

Are there crazy women who push mc around is this? That's the reason I drop AoA.

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I thought I was having a stroke reading that bach line.

This is my first review so bear with me. From other reviews you should know what's good about this novel so I tell you what's bad. First is that all of the main characters get continuously tortured and/or humiliated even after there grow stronger. There is always someone who is stronger and does awful things to the main characters. Like the main characters just can't win with a good strategy or pure strength, like someone has to get really hurt many time before they win. second problem is something I probably only have a problem with but the system in the mc head is a real person and is very annoying. She doesn't tell him things that can save him time and has a noblewoman personality. Example - the mc saw someone really strong and says wow he's really strong and the system says {I'm paraphrasing} "he's not even that strong", like bitch can I take him, like if I started to strike him right now unbeknownst to everyone would I be able to win. Third and this is also something I probably only agree with but the mc isn't really evil or good in my option. In the first few chapters they say that the mc will be the demon lord but idk what type of demon lord he'll be. Like he doesn't have goals/dreams it's just fight people who start fucking with the main characters and when I say fucking with I mean torturing till mostly death, and they would most likely died from the torturing if it weren't for something keeping them alive that if I told you would be spoiling. They do get there revenge always but I would rather not read that. All in all I got to drop this because I like all the characters in this novel and I can't keep seeing them get tortured and I know it's gonna happen again, you can just see it from a mile away.