Review Detail of Eggcellent in Records of the Dark Magus
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Hello there! I am the author, and hopefully you will find as much enjoyment from reading this book as I had writing it! I already wrote quite a few chapters, and I have planned most of the storyline already, so hopefully there will be few inconsistencies. Besides, I write for fun and possess above-average grammar, so feel free to check it out :) Happy reading to all of you!
Records of the Dark Magus
Eggcellent
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Eggcellent:You can think of it as a fan fic, because it is inspired by it. However, the universe/system/characters are all from my imagination :)
You can think of it as a fan fic, because it is inspired by it. However, the universe/system/characters are all from my imagination :)
Aporia:Is this a Age of Adepts fan fic?
Frankly, it seems that the direction of this novel goes towards the anti-hero. It seems that the hero decided not to take full advantage of the system’s ability, which is a stupid thing. On the contrary, instead of quick learning, he wants to waste his time in isolation and research. With all due respect to the author, there are thousands of more professional novels. And the depth of your novels with hundreds of chapters or thousands of chapters (in which romance, friends, morals, credibility, protecting the innocent, and killing the bad guys), this is what appears currently in your novel, so in your opinion, what distinguishes your novel from the rest of these professional novels?!? ? Why would the follower read your novel and leave out what is better than it with a huge amount of chapters?!? So personally and in all honesty, one thing that drives me to read your novel is your promise, that he will be a cruel villain who will kill innocent people and his friends and even his family for his own interests, as you said he will become like Fang Yuan, if you keep your promise to make him a cruel and smart villain, I advise you to hurry, because I I am starting to get bored and lose hope in this hero. I want you to watch this new dark novel, in the hope that you will benefit from it something, and good luck in any case.
Go ahead and read other novels then. SPOILER AHEAD The protagonist is a pragmatic. He will commits evil actions if necessary, he is not a maniac that kills for the sake of it. Fang Yuan is pragmatic, he isn't a psycopath who kills for pleasure. The MC has almost died at this point, and wants to grow stronger before being able to reap the Ivory Tower's resources dry. He has the opportunity to do it in a slow, safe way. Why would he not choose the slow and easy way then? One thing that might distinguish my novel from others is the absence of face slapping. Sure, it is entertaining, but without plot armour, people do not survive it.
Master_Of_gu:Frankly, it seems that the direction of this novel goes towards the anti-hero. It seems that the hero decided not to take full advantage of the system’s ability, which is a stupid thing. On the contrary, instead of quick learning, he wants to waste his time in isolation and research. With all due respect to the author, there are thousands of more professional novels. And the depth of your novels with hundreds of chapters or thousands of chapters (in which romance, friends, morals, credibility, protecting the innocent, and killing the bad guys), this is what appears currently in your novel, so in your opinion, what distinguishes your novel from the rest of these professional novels?!? ? Why would the follower read your novel and leave out what is better than it with a huge amount of chapters?!? So personally and in all honesty, one thing that drives me to read your novel is your promise, that he will be a cruel villain who will kill innocent people and his friends and even his family for his own interests, as you said he will become like Fang Yuan, if you keep your promise to make him a cruel and smart villain, I advise you to hurry, because I I am starting to get bored and lose hope in this hero. I want you to watch this new dark novel, in the hope that you will benefit from it something, and good luck in any case.
I only read novels with a cruel evil mc, because I can no longer bear to read the rest of the novels, simply because mc has the same actions, morals and principles as all mc in the rest of the novels, you simply feel bored and stupid from repeatedly watching this character, that's why I advise you to have your mc special About the rest, however it's just my personal opinion, you can do whatever you want
Eggcellent:Go ahead and read other novels then. SPOILER AHEAD The protagonist is a pragmatic. He will commits evil actions if necessary, he is not a maniac that kills for the sake of it. Fang Yuan is pragmatic, he isn't a psycopath who kills for pleasure. The MC has almost died at this point, and wants to grow stronger before being able to reap the Ivory Tower's resources dry. He has the opportunity to do it in a slow, safe way. Why would he not choose the slow and easy way then? One thing that might distinguish my novel from others is the absence of face slapping. Sure, it is entertaining, but without plot armour, people do not survive it.
honestly eh came here for the evil mc tag and got a at the very most anti hero mc can't say I'm satisfied
Eggcellent:Go ahead and read other novels then. SPOILER AHEAD The protagonist is a pragmatic. He will commits evil actions if necessary, he is not a maniac that kills for the sake of it. Fang Yuan is pragmatic, he isn't a psycopath who kills for pleasure. The MC has almost died at this point, and wants to grow stronger before being able to reap the Ivory Tower's resources dry. He has the opportunity to do it in a slow, safe way. Why would he not choose the slow and easy way then? One thing that might distinguish my novel from others is the absence of face slapping. Sure, it is entertaining, but without plot armour, people do not survive it.
