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Im really hoping to see this world unfold. Best of luck to the author. ............ .............. ............. . .......... The story is starting good even though the power system path is going to fast for my liking personally
Personally havent liked it so far(around ch 60), the over extension of harem to his mother makes the story a bit turbid, while the system is pretty cool, I hoped hed be hunting monsters to get skills as he did with the manticore. I do hope the story develops toward that point, but if its just harem then meh, The time skip transition wasnt very smooth. But the world building was very nice. Nonetheless, again, the use of 3 chps only for sexual intercourse, was very boring to read.
I have to say, while it is greatly interesting that the author created such a complex world in just a few chapters, after integrating such a complex power as the 7 sins he definitely bit more than he will possibly be able to chew in my opinion. The story will become complex to understand and will not benefit the comfort of the reader.