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Fetty_17382yrCommentedi lost all my respect for sara
Sara screamed out in frustration. "AHHGH! You idiot!!! You can't BLAME him for not knowing! He was saving ME! You act so high and strong but when you're in trouble, you rely on Zeref and Jace like they are your little slaves! And when they don't come, you go all beast mode! REALITY CHECK MALIA-" Sara's speech was interrupted by the loud noise of a slap.- Fetty_17383yrPosted
The entire story is like "Lord of the Flys" and is plain. I've read books with much better character development and it all just feels rushed. The chapters are too slow and the pace of the book is messy. This book was a good read in general but just not for me. Keep going tho author! I love the book cover.
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Okay this was the first book I read on here and I felt like it needed to be reviewed. The description was not too much but not too less; just right. Lovely humour and the main characters personality is super likeable. I actually enjoyed this and I am really upset that it updates only 3 times a week. This needs a contract! It deserves to at least top 100. Amazing author! Keep it up!
- Fetty_17383yrCommentedCh 1 01 - What is strong on him...
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Ranks yes!
This was the sad and hard life of a Blessed Rank F and E like themselves. Different from the life of Blessed Rank B, A, or S, who were considered superstars, making millions just to drink a can of soda and say it was refreshing in front of some cameras. - Fetty_17383yrCommented
LETS GOOOO
On a desert road, a large and exquisite black bus drove along the hot asphalt alone. Inside, several different people were doing different things, completely ignoring the unique view from outside the window. - Fetty_17383yrReplied to JJL_BP
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I cried reading this
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LMAO yes
Her hair was naturally curled like big springs around her shoulders, stopping just below her breasts, with lighter brown streaks. Her lips were more plump and pouty. She looked healthy and her light olive skin tone shone under the sun. She hasn't changed at all except for the fact that her freckles were less visible under her eye but the cute little ones on her nose could still be seen. I smirked at her as I realised what she was wearing.