RisingCaos

This paragraph is pretty much wrong/unnecessary, the situation is taken out of context, and you're comparing your fic to canon material whereas in your fic the path of development is clearly different from Canon, anyway, just don't throw free hate for no reason, this doesn't add anything to the plot and actually breaks immersion.

That was a little bit too much I think.

Nah, he might evolve into Primehuman doing that ashahsuhaush

I think you should make her more relevant, as a trainer, she should actually be training the pokemon as well, just hoping on the easy train doesn't make her a good trainer. Besides, making her struggle and face challenges would be a good way to improve her character, be it as one of the main characters of your story, or simply as any other character, it would also make her feel more real. Especially so, if you make her become more mature with time, in a sense of growing up, becoming more responsible, etc.

Plothole here author, you probably meant Lexy since he never said his real name.

Find an Arceus stone then, imagine an evee evolving to god type

That was very well written, I'm honestly surprised by the quality.

That's some Planet of the apes shit going on here, french revolution but with pokemons

Alright, thankfully I didn't give up on the first chapters, you have talent Mr. Author, keep doing what you're doing, it's working very well.

It makes sense though, he can spit fire, why not spit hot air?