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Ye_Feng_6696

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2021-01-24 JoinedIndia
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    Ye_Feng_66963d
    Replied to OldFellow

    Fixed it! Thanks for spotting them

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Friendships and Fun
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    Ye_Feng_66965d
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    At this point, Kyle is First Lieutenant and his deployment in Afghanistan can be assumed to be a reconnaissance mission. Various activities had taken place in the region, especially by the Taliban.

    John and Margaret had prepared Max well for this transition. They talked about kindergarten with excitement, reassuring him that he would make new friends and learn new things. Kyle, now in second grade, shared stories about his own experiences in school, adding to Max's anticipation.
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    Ye_Feng_66966d
    Replied to Korkyros

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate you taking the time to read my story and share your thoughts. I understand your concerns about the pacing and the retelling elements. The initial chapters are intended to establish the protagonist's early experiences and lay a solid foundation for his character development. The story is designed to follow a gradual, weak-to-strong progression, where certain situations will eventually connect him to his past and lead to the discovery of his powers. Regarding the Marvel involvement, it's coming soon! I wanted to make sure the premise and the protagonist's backstory were well-established before diving into the Marvel universe. I believe this approach will make the eventual introduction of superpowers and Marvel elements more impactful and meaningful. I appreciate your patience and hope you'll continue to follow the story as it evolves. Your feedback is invaluable, and I'll keep it in mind as I move forward. Thank you again for your support!

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  • Ye_Feng_6696
    Ye_Feng_66966d
    Replied to VnOmOuS_JokER

    I will try my best!!

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  • Ye_Feng_6696
    Ye_Feng_66967d
    Posted

    Its my baby have to support it unconditionally😁😁

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  • Ye_Feng_6696
    Ye_Feng_66961yr
    Commented

    Great work bhaii!! Loved it! Especially the brother’s moment (ranting one 😂)

    Ch 46 Chapter 46: Shredded to Ruins
    Douluo: My Spirit Is a Spirit Ring [Completed]
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    Ye_Feng_66961yr
    Commented

    Broo😂😂😂

    Ch 45 Chapter 45: I, your father
    Douluo: My Spirit Is a Spirit Ring [Completed]
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