I was a bit confused at first due to the dialogue, also the introduction of characters is a very crucial part of the. However other from these minor drawbacks the story is great.

This novel is very enjoyable, and has an interesting plot . the pace the of the story is a little slow but other from that the story is perfect .

This novel certainly introduces a new concept and has the potential to be a great book.

Thank you for your honest review, I will improve in the coming chapters.

this novel shows great potential, and has a steady build up . it is very enjoyable and would rank among top favorite novels, it also gives an interesting point of view.